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The Kindle store suggests books Based On Your Recent Reading on "your recent reading I enerally like this kind of fictionHowever this book was simply terrible The writing was just poor The " recent reading I Hey Wait a Minute! Five Rough and Reluctant Sex Erotica Stories generally like this kind of fictionHowever this book was simply terrible The writing was just poor The scenes were boring The sex scenes were boringThere was no character developmentI will actively avoid this author from now on What could have been an interesting story was rushed through the pages using nothing than writer s convenience to advance the plot The entire path to conflict with the first enemy should have been the entire story allowing plenty of room toet to know the characters with a longer introduction and allowing plenty of dramatic character interaction to let the reader experience a little back story before the big fightInstead what we et is about five minutes of setup then Bad Guy appears FIGHTThat basic structure repeats itself three times through the storyAlso for a story billed as raunchy this was amazingly tameWhat is this fiction for 12 year olds This entire book is immature The descriptions the dialog even the world building was completely immatureSome examples areThe best room at a casino hotel that has 500 bottles of champagne is 250 a nightThe author thinks an alternator starts a vehicleThe roommate of the MC blows half the rent money on a demon book and the MC laughs about it I ot this book for the amazing cover and people even other authors telling me how adult this book is and was sadly disappointed The most raphic you et is the MC s D being Ethical Responsiveness and the Politics of Difference grabbed and a fade to black so I don t know what people are talking about when they re mention the sex scenes Yeah heets laid but so does James Bond and that s PG 13 I ve seen action on teen drama made for TVCharacter development is abysmal His best friend becomes his thrall for lack of a better of a term along with the 2 succubi and the reasoning is ever clearly defined Their power set The scarecrow grows the closer their bonds are the succubi agree to be thisuy s new slaves are one night if sex Thousand year old SEX demons thought he was so Elizabeth Cady Stanton good they want him to fight Hell And we know he was soood because they re entire personalities revolve around their admiration fo. Disclaimer #1 This series is about a uy that summons a harem of hot. Omises much but doesn t really deliver kinda like the super hot who only teases the super hot woman who only teases a on any books I ot about thirty pages into this before putting it down The writing uality pacing characterization and descriptions are all very poor and I would definitely not recommend spending money on this The only two things preventing this from being a one star are that the plot is relatively original and interesting and the fact that I recognize readers of the nerd erotica The Doll and Her Friends (1893) genre probably care less about writing uality than most readerships out thereThat said if you want to read about succubus orgies there are definitely better options out there The book is fine very entertaining and funny The plot isn t very original but is fairlyood The magic system is very creative and well doneThe characters are Septiņi good the MC and his buddy are very funny and well developed But the women are one dimensional they are there for the fanservice and the needed exposition They aren t very appealing charactersThere is a trend in these books one I don t like that the MC embraces his new life and all its craziness at ones without any hesitation I understand this kind of book doesn t have much depth but the way they act is weird and the uickness to develop and use the magic is too much A person has to train years of years to master something it doesn t use his recently acuired powers with mastery in a few minutes and definitely not to defat a master daemon with thousands of years of experienceThe last thing I want to address is the lazy blurb I can t understand what the author was thinking Is he focusing on his established reader base Because these crappy blurbs aren t the way to add new readers I had never read a Eric Vall book before this one but the cover looked interesting tempting So Iave it a Nightbane World Book One go I amlad I did I confess my knowledge of succubi demons is hazy doesn t matter This is a fun book to read Loved it Maybe we all need a couple of succubi in our lives Doesn t take itself it to serious which works super well with how the characters are described bit fun and humorous than usual which is a nice change of pace. Er #2 It's way raunchier than my other novels You'll probably love it.
Eric Vall ì 0 FREE READR the dudeAfter this rocky "Start The Plot Finally Makes " the plot finally makes appearance in the form of a barely motivated villain Their IMMORTAL former pimpThis book is slow and I ve expected better motivated villain Their IMMORTAL former pimpThis book is slow and I ve expected better a prolific author I m willing to The All New Jonah Twist give the second one a read but only if a real plotline happens Otherwise I m justonna enjoy the covers As an introduction to another of Eric Vall s series it begins at a little bit of a sluggish pace which is possibly its only crux once you et over that it pans out and around revealing a bit of a humerous readWould recommend this and the series A worthwhile read but i kind of hoped for sex scenes i mean they are succubus after all maybe I just know what i like Absolutely loved this first part of the series not a clue what Eric was on when he created Todd but its pure enius keep it up This is definitely raunchy than the author s other books but is mainly in the character interactionsI don t remember there being any descriptions of the bedroom antics that the MC ets into or the supporting characters The only idea of what happened is really talk about it afterwards or jokes made at
the villian s expenseThe MC and his imp sidekick are a pretty funny duo with how theyvillian s expenseThe MC and his imp sidekick are a pretty funny duo with how they towards one another They have a ood bro friendship and are always happy The imp is a stoner stereotype smoking all the time and being smart on the weirdest of topics The MC is always in a PMS good mood and just takes what life isiving him as it comes With the succubi always in the forefront of his mind it is hard for him to The Two of Swords get upset unless he has to to use his powers Just be prepared for a lot of frat humor between the twoThe succubi are pretty much the stereotypical representation of them such as always craving sex and being sexy as hell all the time They help the MC develop his powers yes through sex so he can fight their demon pimp so they can stay with himThe book mainly follows the characters as they try finding a way for the succubi to stay with the MCThere are hardly anyrammar mistakes with is a blessingCan t wait to see how it progresses The story has potential action and snark abound sex scenes not so much It pr. Succubus women and then battles demon lords to save the worldDisclaim.